Tuesday 14 October 2014


Assignment 1 feedback: Learner response



-Super title/Font
-Need a main Flash/story
-Sort image at bottom of page
-Get i logo on there
-Make cover line consistent

I can put the i logo in the right hand corner and delete the sentence with i newspaper. I have decided to name the main flash story " See how much and wear this top is from!". I decided to make this my main flash story because the magazine cover is also about fashion and about things that teenagers love. I changed the cover lines to a different colour for the first words on the magazine covers. At the bottom I changed the pictures to making them bigger and by making them stand out. I still need to finish some off the work.